Just made this one today.
It seems too heavy, but I was focusing on practicing the flow, more than producing a complete song.
I still need to establish a kick+snare sample set for my music, and I figure that I need new legitimate samples, and I have to make them from legit samples or find new legit ones on my own.
I would just have to be on good terms with music, meaning original and legit content, that's all. :D