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I do not know how to make an intro

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I tried everything to make a decent intro, in fact it took me almost 1 month to do a "cool" melody but I only have the climax part, I do not know how to do the intro or the ending ): then I wanted some help, and maybe an evaluation If the melody is good (: *Its Hardstyle o/ Thnx -Zinidx

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I do like the melody and the

I do like the melody and the tempo of the song.  It moves right along and is peppy.  It just seems a little "flat" right now, maybe adding some effects will help to give it some depth.  As far as the introduction goes, I would use a variation of the opening pattern (A1), but just use the lower notes to start and then introduce the A1 pattern.

Just my humble opinion.

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Thnx man I'm going to test

Thnx man I'm going to test what you suggested (: Thnx you so much
(sorry for the bad english, I'm Brazilian)

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The lowest grades you speak,

The lower notes you speak, are those on the scale? I tried here and I was kind of confused D:

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I would keep pattern A1 as it

I would keep pattern A1 as it is, but copy all of the notes from C4 and lower into another pattern, probably as pattern A3.  Insert pattern A3 at the beginning of your song just before A1.

I hope I am making sense.  It may not be what you are looking for, but it makes a more gradual introduction to your song.

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I think I understood ... I

I think I understood ... I made some changes (but not yet effect because I'm afraid to shit the whole thing) I think it was not good (the way I did: /) I'm seriously thinking about giving up ... file...

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Please do not give up on it! 

Please do not give up on it!  I very much like the improvements you have made, especially in the middle.  The silence in the middle builds up anticipation for what comes next.  The pattern A3 was what I was talking about in my earlier post.  You placed it towards the end which sounded good.  Keep working on it.  You are on the right path.

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As I am very emotional, came

As I am very emotional, came out a tear from my eye when i read you comment hahahaaa thank you mgrabow if it were not for your help would have trhown the music and the phone in the trash XD and I do not know if noticed, I forgot to take a part at the end that has nothing To do with music: O
Thank you very much, now I know the way to follow the song is still very dry I will try the secondary effects and sounds ... Thanks mgrabow you are the best !!!

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Thank you for the compliment.

Thank you for the compliment.  I just feel that if you keep at it you will have a song that you can be proud of and others will enjoy listening to.  I will very much like to hear it when you finish as what you have now is good.

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You can be sure that when I

You can be sure that when I finish I will post here and give you the credits, you have really helped me and also thank you for the encouragement. Here is a preview of how the music is... I'll call it "Alive"

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I need no credit. It is your

I need no credit. It is your creativity at work in these songs. I just listened to "Alive" and really enjoyed it! You compose music that is very upbeat and lively. You must be a happy person.

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But who helped to wake it up

But who helped to wake it up was you, Thank God that I am yes (: and it makes me happy you liked it and I make melodies like that because it's the way I really am ^ _ ^ 'and you're a good person Also, why it encouraged me a lot to continue to do this ... Being that I was very discouraged

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I think I just did ... But it

I think I just did ... But it was only 01:13: / and what was Hardstyle Turned a trance: O

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The second version of "Alive"

The second version of "Alive" was even better. The only negative thing I would say has to do with the Bass track. It did seem somewhat harsh as compared to the rest of the song. I might mellow it out some, maybe by adjusting some of the controls on the synth or using a different preset.

Please remember, this is only my taste and others, including yourself, may prefer it the way it is. The notes, I like. It is your choice as the composer and I'm not any kind of authority.

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But I did not understand you

But I did not understand you as an authority, your suggestions made a big difference in the song and I liked it (:
About Bass, what do you suggest? Anything sweeter? Or just raise the tone a bit? If I do not understand you can change it and send me if you want

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Below is your file with

Below is your file with changes I thought might help. Your preference is the one that counts.

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Whooaa O.O now I understand

Whooaa O.O now I understand that you put it milder, in my edition was very glaring, I noticed the difference that made and seems "more" at the right time, I liked man you have XD future (I'm just kidding )Thanks a lot for the help Which gave me ... When my internet is good I'll create an account on SoundCloud and put it there (Zinidx & Mgrabow - Alive) Tnhx again man o/

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You are very welcome. I like

You are very welcome. I like helping people and you brought happiness to my day with your kind comments and your awesome music!  Thank you!

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You are also very welcome,

You are also very welcome, the same happened to me hahaah' and if I can help in something counts on me ... Good rest of night mgrabow o/

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https://soundcloud.com/zinidx

https://soundcloud.com/zinidx/zinidx-mgrabow-alive-trance-1 Track online Righ now o/ i dunno why but i duplicate the song and dunno how to delete it (Nooby user xD. )

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I really liked the version

I really liked the version you put on Soundcloud.  The ending was very nice.

I don't know anything about Soundcloud so I don't know how you delete songs either.  But the good thing is that your song is there.  I let a person here at work listen to it and she really liked it too!  Keep up the good work!

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I'm embarrassed now lol' but

I'm embarrassed now lol' but thanks for the compliment :)
I tried deleting it there but I found it better to delete the account and redo it but now I can not post again : / maybe it is my internet (use of the cell phone) that is bad ..
Thank you once again mgrabow and send a hello for me to the person who listened to the song too..This is an honor for me

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I'm now working in a new

I'm now working in a new track ;) it's really hardstyle now hahaaa XD'
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Edit: Now I know make an intro :D

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Please take this. Hardstyle

Please take this. Hardstyle bread.

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Phorison O.O

Phorsion O.O WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW maaaan
I'm open-mouthed with the improvements you've made, you're a pro and I practically started today doing something "good" on caustic XD
Thank you for the real hardstyle lesson you gave me.:')
Edit: Now I can throw myself in the trash

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Now that I realized I sent

Now that I realized I sent the file without the 2 patterns (A5 and A6) after the A7 I had put .-. It's because I've put almost the same name(Print http://pt-br.tinypic.com/r/2vuiovq/9)... This would be the right file ... It almost follows your idea in the melody
*That would be the right file in my first post that I wanted to say*

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Learn to use midi. It will

Learn to use midi. It will take a short time, but will be useful. You don't have to ruin the project save so you can make sure you don't alter the saved version. Just don't save.

Make MIDI files.

Use the Loop function by the time marker.

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I'll do it next time ^^

I'll do it next time ^^ thanks for the tip Phorsion (:
I'll try to make a better song because in this I did shit :-L

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Hey Phorsion... I was

Hey Phorsion... I was thinking about finish my project by my own style... Without your edits... When I discovered that melody i was thinking about post but like a original music, i liked so much of what you done with the project but now i'm editing to try to post it (: with the lesson that you gave me :,) any problem? I can do it?
If it upsets you or something like that (I worry too much about not letting anyone down) I quit (: it's because I wanted something original of mine, but I'll always remember and highlight that it was you who taught me today.I thought about it all day D:

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I'm the same.

I'm the same.

To get better, you just have to follow your work style.

Because if you don't enjoy what you can do, then you won't be able to remix very well in your way.

 

You become a better DJ. ^ w^

A better hard worker. Hardstyle Worker.

Make a song called Hardstyle Worker or I will do that? xD

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Wise words Phorsion, thank

Wise words Phorsion, thank you (: It's incredible the humility that exists on this site, incredible indeed! Maybe I'll make an EP with that name haaah
Thank you very much for the words (:One day I get to your level (I wish XD)

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Ok, we will make an EP.

Ok, we will make an EP.

I will only just make a collaboration song with you.

The song is Hardstyle Worker, the main song, except it's unusually a remix instead of an original main track.

Project: Hardstyle Worker ...

Initiate! Start!

 

You can post the collaboration in the sub-forum (collaborations) @ show and tell.

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Sorry i misunterstood your

Sorry i misunterstood your earlier post :L
See if I get it ...
Are you talking about making a new song with that name, or is it about this project "HardsPrjectV2"?
Edit: "HardsPrject2" is original o/

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Today I started to do a

Today I started to do a project in DnB if you like the melody we can post it too :D
It's just a Sketch XD

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I'm saying that we should go

I'm saying that we should go to the collaboration posting area @ show and tell. Nevermind, someone will put this there...

 

I don't want to make a dnb, that's a bit off my original style so it will take more longer.

Let's just make Hardstyle?

Como te llama? xD

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Okay, let's go there then.

Okay, let's go there then.
I'm just confused if it's to post this project (hardsprject) there XD
If you're asking my name to put in the music title, better no D:
Mas me llamo %*&$¥
Como te llamas ?

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We are "collaborating" here

We are "collaborating" here now.

I will work on this DnB and make it the song called Hardstyle Worker!

 

Please wait.

 

Oh, and me llamo es Hardstyle.

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Wataf* HAHAAAAAAAA i thought

Wataf* HAHAAAAAAAA i thought you were asking my name Whata a retard i am .-. Leave this in off ): don't worry about this dnb, is a shit we will work just within Hardstyle

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Alright, make some more music

Alright, make some more music on this.

 

You are Frontliner with Creative Community lol. (Abject)

I am Headhunterz... (Headhunterz)

 

This is our Scantraxx Rootz. :D

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Better we continue within

Better we continue within hardstyle man I do like your editings in dnb but i have no idea to what to do with this project ._.
We post the hardsproject (:
Right? P* & Z - Hardstyle worker (Z 30 sec Collab) XD
You as headhunterz i as Atmozfears XD

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Ok, work on the hard project

Ok, work on the hard project and I will resample some of the beatbox sounds from the dnb.

We're close. Keep going.

 

Haha, Headhunterz never collaborated with Atmozfearz. Never did!!

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I have other hardstyle

I have other hardstyle proyecto here... 2 single tracks will be better than 1

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Yeah i know, is because was

Yeah i know, is because was the first name that come in my mind to comment XD

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When did you make this lol!~

When did you make this lol!~

You became legendary in one day!?

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It's that I start and I can

It's that I start and I can never finish and I always think it's bad and I do another XD

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Haha, I was the same, but I

Haha, I was the same, but I made lengthy feelz.

My inspiration to complete the music was hard dancing.
I made the music for dancing, not dreaming.

 

Do I work on this 'Other' too?

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And a i have other project

And a i have other project here ._. I'm sad :/ i discover melodies but... For nothing ;-; this is messy Hear...

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Yeah. You can do it (: i'm

Yeah. You can do it (: i'm giving up

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I'm so sleepy. I must rest

I'm so sleepy. I must rest now...

 

These songs are for Project: Hardstyle Worker  ?

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Yeah

Yeah
Put that slogan "Finish it if you Can" haha XD i'll do more melodies tomorrow (: bye man -.

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You'll post on forum or i

You'll post on forum or i post?

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