I updated the song, mixed it better, added a whole bunch of changes, but one thing I'm starting to feel lazy about is mastering the song again which I of course didn't do.
Overall, I feel that Uplifting Trance can be a cute genre if using saw based synths and it's a huge wall of sound too that way. But I'm not really a Trance producer except making a song such as this it's probably from playing synths a lot. I must be skilled at melody. Even DJ EOF-1 thinks my melodies are spot on/music. My melodies are plainly te-riff-ik or it's just my style... Anyway, hail music to die for. :)