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Rkillah
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I'm sorry (piano beat ). WIP

Please tell me if it lame and tell me where to improve

D4NGL3S
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I like the piano & drum

I like the piano & drum sequencing all i can suggest is some lyrics and fx like noise sweeps etc but this is good kp it going

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@D4NGL3S

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Noob question, what is a noise sweep?

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thanks I'll do so

thanks

I'll do so

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This is good stuff Rkillah,

This is good stuff Rkillah, real smooth! I'd have to agree it sounds like it needs vocals but this is a solid start.

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Hahaha... Thanks. I'll try to

Hahaha... Thanks. I'll try to find a vocalist when it's finished

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Idk if thats what the pros

Idk if thats what the pros call it lol but i attatched a basic "noise sweep" effect took about 2 secs to make.

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Really Nice Rkillah. A few

Really Nice Rkillah. A few suggestion tho, It would be cool if you ran an 808 alongside that kick, and maybe shift a bit to the right the width of that melody that I suppose comes in at the chorus.

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Do you mind doing that for me

Do you mind doing that for me?

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Rkillah
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I'll try to do that.

I'll try to do that.

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Chris Dmeek
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OK, you can send me the file,

OK, you can send me the file, just that it might be over the weekend

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Thanks. During the week I'll

Thanks. During the week I'll apload a similar beat to that one, but this one has vocals

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Hey now this is the cleanest

Hey now this is the cleanest mix I've heard you showcase up here.  This groove is quite pleasant to listen to, and I enjoyed this one alot -- probably one of my favorites of yours to date.

Nice work 

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Sounds like the bass is just

Sounds like the bass is just a bit off key...what are you using for bass?
For sure it's one of your best so far;)

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Wow!!! Thanks Jason :)

Wow!!! Thanks Jason :)

Hahaha,
lifeup, i used finger bass from the subsynth

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Josh R
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That's a really nice track

That's a really nice track you got. I love playing with pianos, one of my most favorite instruments! 

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Nice, smooth and clean with a

Nice, smooth and clean with a lot of nice empty spaces and separation.  I see this as an awesome canvas for some nice improvised melodies with almost any jazz sounds, vibes, sax, flute.  It's way to "real" and live sounding to get too electronic.  Very nice!

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@Josh ,piano and string are

@Josh ,piano and string are my favorite instruments :) i used em in all my beats

Jhsound, thanks man :)

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@D4NGL3S Oh that's what it is

@D4NGL3S Oh that's what it is. Thanks.

 

@RKillah Great track you have going on. yes

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Thanks mate :)

Thanks mate :)

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