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This is my first song that the public here. It is a song with the vocals, but I do not know what is the sub-genre. Who is expert here probably knows. It's a quiet little song which gradually becoming more dynamic.
I hope you enjoy. :)
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you can not download it? Or maybe it makes you read?
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I would have listened but you are sharing a caustic file from the 3.2 beta This is not a version that everyone has, so perhaps you should share it in another format.
JHS
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I added the soundcloud link but I do not show. Why?
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Just cut/paste the SC link into your comment. Don't use the form.
JHS
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OK.
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@JHSound hey what do you think?
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I think it sounds like experimental music that twists traditional melodies and structures into dissonant and harsh sounds. It sounds like Yoko Ono crashed into Bjork and this came out. The only traditional sound is the rhythm. I would say it is interesting in its experimental nature but not pleasing to listen to.
JHS
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I like, I'm sorry you do not like it. :(
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Hey, don't be sad. :-) I appreciated it but it was just my opinion as to what kind of music it is. It is not melodic in a traditional way and is more experimental sounding.
JHS
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OK, thanks ... I knew that it was only your own, but I'm left us a little bad. Moreover, you have not written anything about singing. Anyway I appreciated your review. I'm serious. :)
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If you want an honest opinion, I would focus more on developing musical instrument skills as opposed to vocal skills.....
Why should I concentrate on instrumental skills? @JHSound Wrote me that for him my song is too experimental for him. It's okay, I accept and thank you for your opinion, which also seems to me honest and sincere ... and this could serve in the future. I asked for an opinion for the voice because I'm a singer, and therefore of importance line put in first place my voice (you do not put the instrument in the first place?). I think you'll agree with me that constructive criticism, or just your own opinion, I would be really helpful, rather than a sermon or a complaint as you're doing right now. If you want to help me, hear my song. Both the instrumental and vocal side. OK Jason? ;)
Peace and love.
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Hmmmm I did not give a sermon or complaint.... Read my reply again. You wanted straight honest feedback. I gave it. I'll just leave it at that for now...
For now? What does it mean? :O
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Don't worry about it. After I saw your SoundCloud profile, it confirmed for me that we have been down this road before....
I'll leave you with this final advice: focus on your music and instrumentation (you have good choice of sounds for sure) and develop your music theory and composition; singing is not your forte'.
That is all.
I'll try to follow your advice. Hello Friend. :)
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Daniele, hai molto da imparare, ma non dire di essere un cantate e dare anche le prove di non esserlo. Ti consiglio di leggere qualcosa sulla teoria musicale, troverai diverse informazioni su internet, sui synth, su tutto ciò che ti serve. Continua ad esercitarti e a sperimentare, ma solo dopo aver imparato le basi della musica.
Sinceramente, poi, anche il testo non è un gran che
Sei italiano o la tua è una traduzione? Comunque sò bene che mi devo ancora esercitare tanto e non penso che tutti i cantanti debbano essere come Rihanna, o Mina. Non penso di essere un grande cantante, inoltre non suono synth ma ho letto qualcosa in proposito. Purtroppo io registro con il mic del mio tablet e la qualità è quella che è. :) Quando potrò acquisterò una scheda audio e un microfono. A breve (spero) posterò un nuovo brano. E sarò curioso di sentire la tua opinione. Per quanto riguarda il testo: io canto ciò che sento, non mi metto li a pensare a cosa scrivere, inoltre un sacco di cantanti scrivono testi banali. Ti ringrazio per la tua opinione. Mi aiuterà a migliorare.
Pace.
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Sono italiano
Scusa se ti sono sembrato cattivo, ho detto quello che penso. Io sono il primo che DEVE migliorare, ho intenzione di farlo a tutti i costi. L'importante è non abbattersi e non mollare mai, e tu mi sembra che l'abbia capito. Ti consiglio di vedere un po' di nozioni di armonia e magari di mixing per avere qualche base solida, poi il resto verrà da solo con molta pratica.
Beh, che altro dirti? Buon lavoro ;)
Ah, e solo perché molti altri "cantanti" scrivono testi banali non significa che debba farlo anche tu, cerca sempre di staccarti dalla massa
Scusa non mi sono spiegato bene. Ho apprezzato e ti ringrazio. Non copio gli altri e faccio testi banali, semplicemente scrivo ciò che penso. Una volta facevo testi migliori. Io apprezzo i tuoi consigli e ti ringrazio per essere stato così diretto. Buon lavoro anche a te.:)
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