You need to check you signal chain, it's clipping all over. I had a quick look at your castic file and some sounds start to clipp in the machine already, then you push it further in the mixer and even more in the master chain. This doesn't work, if you want the signal to clipp then use a distortion effect but never ever drive your signal past 0db.
But the track is cool and I hear potential if you can do a better mix.
Here's a quick mix I made for you. I didn't what feel you are looking for except for LOUD so thats what I went for. It needs some more work, EQ, balincing and so on, but at least you can hear all instruments now.
some nice ideas, but a bit too all over the place and random, but not in a ''meant-to-be'' sense...
try to order things a little better, even if you actually area trying to get a ''random'' feel..
and Pan65 had some good advice
You need to check you signal chain, it's clipping all over. I had a quick look at your castic file and some sounds start to clipp in the machine already, then you push it further in the mixer and even more in the master chain. This doesn't work, if you want the signal to clipp then use a distortion effect but never ever drive your signal past 0db.
But the track is cool and I hear potential if you can do a better mix.
Here's a quick mix I made for you. I didn't what feel you are looking for except for LOUD so thats what I went for. It needs some more work, EQ, balincing and so on, but at least you can hear all instruments now.
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some nice ideas, but a bit too all over the place and random, but not in a ''meant-to-be'' sense...
try to order things a little better, even if you actually area trying to get a ''random'' feel..
and Pan65 had some good advice