I don't wanna be a dick, but I feel the need to point out both sides of the glass this time, because it's a pity for a potentially great track to get screwed up because of a minor aspect.
On one hand, your track has great dynamics and is mastered gorgeously. The synth pads are crispy and lush and the claps are beautifully stereofied.
On the other hand, the melody appears as being almost randomly generated, going nowhere, some parts being constituted of dissonant chords, while other sounding like shitty rip-offs from one of Prodigy's songs. Sorry mate, you need to work on the melody some more to get the notes right.
I hope you don't take it personally, I only said what needed to be said. Nice track per total, though.
Show me the Prodigy's song and does The Prodigy use sixteenth-notes? And so, am I the Prodigy to you? '~' Because I did try a remix on Mark More's song and Vagrant Dandy called me ...THE...PRODIGY :D
Yeah Duran, I think that you need to get a grip on making melodies. First, try it on four bars. Listen to the notes and see if they blend with the beat. Progressive house melodies are the easiest while dubstep is more complex. I suggest you listen to the former and study it by ear. Then work it step by step. No need to hurry that wild side.
No those were for Orbituants my other song. THis raw song is actually loud though. You want it loud as this? We're breaking the volume on it and it is awesome.
I don't wanna be a dick, but I feel the need to point out both sides of the glass this time, because it's a pity for a potentially great track to get screwed up because of a minor aspect.
On one hand, your track has great dynamics and is mastered gorgeously. The synth pads are crispy and lush and the claps are beautifully stereofied.
On the other hand, the melody appears as being almost randomly generated, going nowhere, some parts being constituted of dissonant chords, while other sounding like shitty rip-offs from one of Prodigy's songs. Sorry mate, you need to work on the melody some more to get the notes right.
I hope you don't take it personally, I only said what needed to be said. Nice track per total, though.
Show me the Prodigy's song and does The Prodigy use sixteenth-notes? And so, am I the Prodigy to you? '~' Because I did try a remix on Mark More's song and Vagrant Dandy called me ...THE...PRODIGY :D
Ok. I get why I'm like The Prodigy.
Actually, I just want to know which part I change so that I'm not "Prodiguous". *made that up :P*
Yeah Duran, I think that you need to get a grip on making melodies. First, try it on four bars. Listen to the notes and see if they blend with the beat. Progressive house melodies are the easiest while dubstep is more complex. I suggest you listen to the former and study it by ear. Then work it step by step. No need to hurry that wild side.
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I think I am prodigy-like because I may be considered repetitive. But I still have to wait and hear which one I can compare this to.
I don't need to get a grip just yet. I got teh wildstyle. Don't tame me like a modular :D.
I know... They are talking about The melody (8x one) ...I just wanted to make it raw... But it's okay to get criticisms....
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No those were for Orbituants my other song. THis raw song is actually loud though. You want it loud as this? We're breaking the volume on it and it is awesome.
No man Sodom Horses was pointing out on the melodies I made.... Yeah you can lower the volumes.. And yeah... Raise bass volume of rez kick...
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You're right it was the x8 bar. I need to variate more.
So hard